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SpiderLedgic- Posts : 165
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Infinitygohan- Posts : 676
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What happened to the Spiderman fic?
SpiderLedgic- Posts : 165
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Infinitygohan wrote:What happened to the Spiderman fic?
...That's a good question. I didn't forget about it, -- I have worked on it recently -- but I've decided to make TML my top priority for now.
Infinitygohan- Posts : 676
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Ah
Super Vegetarott- Posts : 949
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How far along is the new chapter, Ledgic?
SpiderLedgic- Posts : 165
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Super Vegetarott wrote:How far along is the new chapter, Ledgic?
About 1,000 or so more words to go. There are also some things that I'm trying to decide if I should keep or what. Hopefully I can get it done it a week.
Apope- Posts : 368
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Hey, couldn't you just say that he just didn't wanna come back(like in the Cell Saga)in Goku-ish Fashion, instead of having him have a stroke or something?
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Heart attack, also Goku wouldn't have done that again. I think the last time he did it was because he didn't know about Goten, or something.
Apope- Posts : 368
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Well, even if I think he would, you gotta admit it's kinda lame, and Plot-Holish too, since he did that to himself, so even if he had a Heart Attack or something, he should still be revived. On the other hand, him being killed by a Virus is kinda a Plot-Hole too, since a Virus is an "external organism", so in reality something else/someone kills you, so you should still be revived, so.........I dunno...........
Super Vegetarott- Posts : 949
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A virus is natural. Shenron/Porunga can't revive those who have died a natural death. There's no plot hole whatsoever.
Apope- Posts : 368
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What do you mean natural?! At least from my point of view, it's as natural as somebody else killing you.
Super Vegetarott- Posts : 949
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That's not natural; that's someone else prematurely ending your life. Viruses, illnesses, those all qualify as natural.
Apope- Posts : 368
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Well, as I already said, a Virus is another organism, so it can't be natural.
SpiderLedgic- Posts : 165
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Apope wrote:Hey, couldn't you just say that he just didn't wanna come back(like in the Cell Saga)in Goku-ish Fashion, instead of having him have a stroke or something?
It was cardiac arrest and I did use that don't want to come back explanation. He felt that he broke his promise to not step in himself and save the day again, and this time he intends to keep it. Thanks for the review by the way. In the review you suggested 4 ways that would've been better and I actually used 3 of them in that very chapter =P
Apope- Posts : 368
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Ok, sorry then ^^! Good work then ^^!XD
SpiderLedgic- Posts : 165
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Apope wrote:Ok, sorry then ^^! Good work then ^^!XD
No problem! Thanks, man!
Apope- Posts : 368
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Yeah man! And sorry for doubting you anyway ^^! Great work!
Since your New Chapter's out, I wanted to ask:No Yo!Son Goku And His Friends Return and no BoG? But why?!
And what about that OC Villain?
Since your New Chapter's out, I wanted to ask:No Yo!Son Goku And His Friends Return and no BoG? But why?!
And what about that OC Villain?
SpiderLedgic- Posts : 165
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To me, there's too many inconsistencies in Battle of the Gods for me to use in TML. And I have didn't plans for Tarble.
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