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    Ledgy's Corner

    Post  SpiderLedgic on Tue Jun 11, 2013 11:01 pm

    Question about my story, or about anything you'd like to know? I'll make sure I try to answer every one.
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    Re: Ledgy's Corner

    Post  Infinitygohan on Tue Jun 11, 2013 11:03 pm

    What happened to the Spiderman fic?


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    Post  SpiderLedgic on Tue Jun 11, 2013 11:12 pm

    Infinitygohan wrote:What happened to the Spiderman fic?

    ...That's a good question. I didn't forget about it, -- I have worked on it recently -- but I've decided to make TML my top priority for now.
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    Post  Infinitygohan on Tue Jun 11, 2013 11:13 pm

    Ah


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    Post  Super Vegetarott on Tue Jun 11, 2013 11:19 pm

    How far along is the new chapter, Ledgic?


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    Post  SpiderLedgic on Tue Jun 11, 2013 11:23 pm

    Super Vegetarott wrote:How far along is the new chapter, Ledgic?

    About 1,000 or so more words to go. There are also some things that I'm trying to decide if I should keep or what. Hopefully I can get it done it a week.
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    Re: Ledgy's Corner

    Post  Apope on Wed Jun 12, 2013 1:55 am

    Hey, couldn't you just say that he just didn't wanna come back(like in the Cell Saga)in Goku-ish Fashion, instead of having him have a stroke or something?
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    Post  CrazyBuu on Wed Jun 12, 2013 2:06 am

    Heart attack, also Goku wouldn't have done that again. I think the last time he did it was because he didn't know about Goten, or something.


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    Post  Apope on Wed Jun 12, 2013 2:12 am

    Well, even if I think he would, you gotta admit it's kinda lame, and Plot-Holish too, since he did that to himself, so even if he had a Heart Attack or something, he should still be revived. On the other hand, him being killed by a Virus is kinda a Plot-Hole too, since a Virus is an "external organism", so in reality something else/someone kills you, so you should still be revived, so.........I dunno...........
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    Post  Super Vegetarott on Wed Jun 12, 2013 2:15 am

    A virus is natural. Shenron/Porunga can't revive those who have died a natural death. There's no plot hole whatsoever.


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    Post  Apope on Wed Jun 12, 2013 2:19 am

    What do you mean natural?! At least from my point of view, it's as natural as somebody else killing you.
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    Post  Super Vegetarott on Wed Jun 12, 2013 2:26 am

    That's not natural; that's someone else prematurely ending your life. Viruses, illnesses, those all qualify as natural.


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    Post  Apope on Wed Jun 12, 2013 2:28 am

    Well, as I already said, a Virus is another organism, so it can't be natural.
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    Post  SpiderLedgic on Wed Jun 12, 2013 2:45 am

    Apope wrote:Hey, couldn't you just say that he just didn't wanna come back(like in the Cell Saga)in Goku-ish Fashion, instead of having him have a stroke or something?

    It was cardiac arrest and I did use that don't want to come back explanation. He felt that he broke his promise to not step in himself and save the day again, and this time he intends to keep it. Thanks for the review by the way. In the review you suggested 4 ways that would've been better and I actually used 3 of them in that very chapter =P

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    Post  Apope on Wed Jun 12, 2013 2:57 am

    Ok, sorry then ^^! Good work then ^^!XD
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    Post  SpiderLedgic on Wed Jun 12, 2013 3:09 am

    Apope wrote:Ok, sorry then ^^! Good work then ^^!XD

    No problem! Thanks, man! Smile
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    Post  Apope on Wed Jun 12, 2013 5:50 am

    Yeah man! And sorry for doubting you anyway ^^! Great work!
    Since your New Chapter's out, I wanted to ask:No Yo!Son Goku And His Friends Return and no BoG? But why?!
    And what about that OC Villain?
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    Re: Ledgy's Corner

    Post  SpiderLedgic on Thu Nov 21, 2013 3:37 am

    To me, there's too many inconsistencies in Battle of the Gods for me to use in TML. And I have didn't plans for Tarble.

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